Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Feature

DRINKING/Brinkman

The Truth About Underage Drinking at K

By Kara Brinkman

KALAMAZOO, Mich.—A freshman girl regurgitates into the plastic garbage bag. It is 2 a.m. at a student house on Monroe Street. The party is over—as the kegs are empty—and the last remaining partygoers stumble out the door. Their faces show exhaustion after a night of drinking and dancing in the dingy basement. A few of their shoulders and heads bump into the walls of the house, knocking more of the crumbly paint off the old walls, as their lingering drunken state does not allow them to walk in a straight line.

“I think drunk people are funny,” K College senior Joe Garvin said when asked about his views on drinking. Though now 21, the double computer science and English major admits to once drinking underage. He attributes his weekend drinking, which began his freshman year, to fun and socializing.

Senior Aaron Silverman, 21, also drank for fun as an under classman. Like Garvin, he did it for the social life. It’s a way “to be involved,” said Silverman.

Not every student agrees with Silverman and Garvin’s relaxed attitude towards drinking. 20-year-old K College junior Chelsea Rye rejects the idea of students who drink just to have an excuse to act stupid. “I don’t have a problem with drinking in moderation," she adds, and says there was one occasion where she did drink, but it is not something she seeks to do.

Other students have less extreme views on drinking than Garvin and Rye. Elliot Paquette looks at drinking as more of a cultural activity. The 20-year-old Math major who studied abroad in Hungary says that when he drinks it is mainly once every two weeks and then it is mostly wine. “Wine is one of the most interesting drinks,” Paquette said. “It is really nice to drink wine with dinner.”

Yet he dislikes that leads to activities you don’t intend to happen. “It leads to sex, even when you don’t intend it to,” said Paquette. He knows first hand the way alcohol can make you lose control. ‘It’s like having an iron grip and letting it go.”

Alcohol has other consequences as well. Freshman Courtney Carroll, 18, recalls a time earlier this year in her Hoben residence hall when a fellow resident took a prospective student to a party. The young prospective student go so drunk that she locked herself out of the room and could not figure out how to open the hallway doors. This prospective student then threw up in the hallway, at which point the RA was alerted of the situation. Carroll said it was scary to see.

RAs deal with drinking matters throughout the quarter. For the 2006-2007 academic year, 32 students were involved in alcohol incidents in the Fall quarter, 19 in the winter, and 22 in the spring, according to the Office of Residential Life. Those numbers are far smaller than what the staff of Residential Living estimates.

Marcquel Pickett, 21, a senior RA guesses that close to 80 percent of students underage drink in the dorms on the weekend. Pickett admits to drinking as a freshman and believes that those experiences help him today when dealing with his residents. He believed the fact that he can talk to his residents about drinking from a personal perspective gives his residents as sense of trust in him.

Zach Ebling, 21, another senior RA, also drank as a freshman. Though neither Ebling nor Pickett were ever in trouble for drinking underage, they both sympathize with the few students they have had to write up for drinking. Writing someone up makes them feel horrible, however “it’s my job,” said Pickett.

Senior RA Sarah Nicholus, 22, agrees. If she knows someone is in a room drinking, it is her job to go in and address it.

Nicholus also believes there is more going on than they catch. It is important for the safety of the residents to catch people who they label as high risk. People considered high risk is those who are throw up, binge drink, and fall over as they walk.

Pickett and Ebling agree. Drinking a beer quietly in your room won’t get you in trouble since the RAs can only come in if they suspect drinking is going on. Loud parties, throwing up, people in and out of a door room frequently, and falling into objects are the behavior clues that typically lead RAs to find drinking occurring in the dorms.

Dana Jansma, Associate Dean of Students, says that their main concern is safety. “We want people to be safe,” she said. One of the fears of students is that if they get in trouble for drinking, they will not be able to go on study abroad. Jansma clarified that. The Resident Life staff is not here to ruin abroad chances. The Center for International Programs controls abroad eligibility.

“It’s not our job to catch them all the time,” said Jansma, while discussing students drinking habits. Residential Life does not want to get you in big trouble. They just want students to drink responsibly.

Though Nicholus believes that most students do not drink responsibly, Jansma says that they get very few repeat offenders from underage drinking. Perhaps it students get smarter at how to conceal their drinking habits in the dorms, she said. Ebling notes how he’s noticed that sophomores appear to drink more, but freshman seem to get in trouble more often.

Dorm types may also have a lot to do with it. Suites in Crissey and Severn are a lot more closed off than hallway dorm rooms of Hoben, DeWaters, and Trowbridge. Loud drinking in the back rooms of the suites draws less attention than drinking in non-suites, according to Pickett and Ebling.

Still, the RAs and Residential Life are not out to get you. “RAs are not police officers,” Jansma said. Once students are written up, it is out of the RAs control. The RAs just document what happened during the write-up and hand it over to the area coordinators who determine what the possible violations might be.

Nicholus, Pickett, and Ebling emphasize that their main goal is community building. Writing people up just create tensions between them and their residents. Ebling said he feels horrible when discussing the sole incident he experienced where he had to write people up for underage drinking during his sophomore year as an RA in Hoben. Pickett agrees. He feels bad about doing and said, “it’s a hassle to write people up."


The drunken freshman girl regurgitating into a bag at someone's house she does not know will not get in trouble tonight. There are still some students sober enough to look out for her. But what about next time? Will she be able to make it all the way to the party house before getting caught drinking on campus. Or will something worse happen?

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Monday, December 3, 2007

Thoughts on news....

As I was scanning some online news stories, some thoughts about news came to mind.

http://omg.yahoo.com/britney-spears-celebrates-her-26th-birthday-with-paris-hilton/news/4500

That link is to an article about Britney Spears's 26th birthday celebration. Though not appealing to everybody, it can be labeled as news because her fans may care. The interesting part of the news article is the option readers have to leave comments at the bottom. Though the people's opinions about Britney don't necessarily change the news, the comments offer a wide perspective on how people perceive receiving news like this. If they truly did not care, as some commentators stated, they wouldn't even bother reading and especially not posting about the article. These comments just show how trashy news like this does interest people, even those claiming to not be her fans.

Sunday, December 2, 2007

Article review

http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/offtopic/sns-ap-odd-bracelet-chicken,1,4724727.story?ctrack=4&cset=true

I came across this article at the Chicago Tribune website. Since it is not hard news, the lead does not have to include all the information. The way it begins still draws you into the story as the first paragraph makes you want to know how something that bizarre could happen. The body of the article explains the story of what happened and then concludes with people's reactions to it. The kicker ends with a good quote.

Though this is not real "news" that effects lots of people, it is a nice, sweet, happy story that some may enjoy reading.

Tuesday, November 6, 2007

Child Death/Brinkman

Child Dies from Arson

By Kara Brinkman

KALAMAZOO, Mich.—The death of a 3-year-old child in the fire led police to arrest two in suspicion of arson, according to officials.

Tiffany Blanchard, 3, died early this morning of smoke inhalation after being trapped on the second floor of burning duplex at 1275 Monroe St. with her two brothers, Torry 5, and Terry 6, according to a spokesperson for Bronson Memorial Hospital. The seven other tenants escaped the burning building.

Firefights Samuel Walshe, of Company 4, and James O’Brian, of Company 2, tore a hole in the wall of the building and pulled the three children from the flames, according to Patricia Clarksen, deputy chief of the Kalamazoo Fire Department.

Police suspect that the fire started around 2 a.m. By the time the fire was called in at 2:10 a.m. and firefighters were on the scene, the building was already engulfed in flames. There is $250,000 worth of damage, Clarksen said. Fire Marshall Sam Johnson investigated the fire and suspects the use of some sort of exhilarant.

Police believe that Marie Blanchard, the children’s mother, was the target of arson by her estranged boyfriend. According to reports, witnesses spotted two figures fleeing the scene and evidence led police to suspect and arrest Vincent DeNafrio, 33, and a 16-year-old unidentified juvenile, both of Mattawan, on suspicion of arson said Lt. Regina Santarpio of the Kalamazoo Police Department. “We believe that DeNafrio is the estranged boyfriend,” said Santarpio. The suspects are to be arraigned tomorrow at 10 a.m.

Both Torry and Terry survived the fire. They were treated for minor injuries at Bronson Memorial Hospital and released to their mother at 10 a.m., according to officials at Bronson.

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Sunday, October 28, 2007

Lead: Colombia hoards an exclusionary political and economic society that hinders the democratic process, human rights activist Cecilia Zarate-Laun said in a speech last night at K College.

Quote: Get a direct quote about what she said of the three kinds of political parties in Colombia and how they cause so much conflict.

Nut graph: With Colombia is such a chaotic mess, Zarate-Laun urges all young people to become involved in democracy so that what is happening in Colombia does not happen anywhere else.

More background information: Go into detail about how Colombia has been involved in civil conflict for decades due to its geographic location and warped political system.

Ending: Talk about what kind of work Zarate-Laun does to spread word of the happenings in Colombia and how to prevent it.

Kicker: “It takes a great deal of courage to do the kind of work she does,” said John Dugas, Political Science Professor at K College.

Saturday, October 20, 2007

AHSOM OBITUARY/Brinkman

WWII Hero Dies

By Kara Brinkman

KALAMAZOO, Mich.—Jeffery R. Ahson, 79, World War II veteran and retired firefighter died in his home last night of emphysema.

“Ahson was a genuine American hero,” said Lt. Cmdr. Jeraldine Fyfe.

Mr. Ahson played a heroic part in World War II. He served as a petty officer aboard the USS Emery during the Battle of Midway in June 1942. When a fellow sailor was shot, Mr. Ahson took up the vacant gun post and shot down three enemy planes. He saved four sailors’ lives. Those brave acts won him a Purple Heart and the Navy Cross, and promoted him to the rank of ensign.

Born in Chico, Calif., Mr. Ahson moved to Kalamazoo after the war where he became a firefighter. He retired from the fire department in 1966 and worked as a car salesman until 1985. He collected firefighter artifacts for much of his life and left these artifacts to the Kalamazoo Museum.

Mr. Ahson served as post commander in the American Legion Post 702 and VFW Post 4206. He was a member of the Elks Lodge, National Checkers Association, and Gideons International. He also served as an usher at John Calvin Presbyterian Church.

Mr. Ahson is survived by wife Therese Alpert; daughters Lela Stalling of Pipe Creek, Texas and Angela Molino of Omaha, Neb.; son Richard D. Ahson of Phillipsburg, Kan.; brother Henrey Ahson of San Francisco; sisters Shirley Solom of Newark, N.J. and Judith Eaker of Reedsville, N.C.; and 5 grandchildren.

Services will be held Saturday at 10 am at Littletone Mortuary followed by a burial at Memorial Park Cemetery. Viewings will be held Fridat night from 4-5:30 pm and 7:30-9 om. The family requests no flowers.

Saturday, October 13, 2007

C. Edward Sandburg Jr.'s Obituary Review

http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/obituaries/chi-hed_sandberg_12oct12,0,4438404.story

This is a great obituary. It follows the basic format we studied in class. It starts off with stating what this man did and why his death should be noted in this way. It then goes into a narrative about his life, though is does not cover anything that happened in his childhood, before he started his business that made him notable. The obituary also mentions some notable things Sandburg did through his business, like special treatments he gave his customers and stuff. There is no mention of memberships and affiliations, but perhaps there weren't any.

It ends with a list of survivors and a statement about plans for burial and services.

Tuesday, October 9, 2007

In-Class Writing Assignment thoughts...

The writing assignment for class today came as quite a surprise. I've never even attempted to write a real article in my life, so the only knowledge I had on how to do this came from just the few days of class we've had.

What came to be most difficult was after doing all the interviews, being able to organize them into an article. Looking at the entirety of what each interviewee told me made the process even more challenging because taking their quotes out of context to fit my needs seemed so easy, yet you cannot do that as a journalist.

Saturday, October 6, 2007

Rich. pg. 181. ex. #1

Meriden, CT— Connecticut State Police ordered a ban on hand-held radar guns yesterday due to possible cancer risks from long-term exposure to the radiated waves emitted by the devices, state police spokesman Adam Bertuli said.

“The feeling here is to err on the side of caution until more is known about the issue,” Bertuli said. The ban was ordered on as a precaution until more research is done on possible links.

This move comes just two months after three municipal police officers in Connecticut filed worker’s compensation claims, saying they developed cancer from using hand-held radar guns

The ban affects 70 radar guns, which will be drawn from service. Rader guns with transmitters mounted on the outside of the radar units will continue to be used.


Wednesday, October 3, 2007

The New York Times. October 2, 2007 issue. Article by Mireya Navarro


Spears Loses Sons' Custody to Ex-Spouse After Testing

Los Angeles, Oct 1.—Britney Spears has lost custody of her two sons after a superior Court Judge ruled Monday that her ex-husband, Kevin Federline, would take custody beginning Wednesday until further order of the court.


This is a good hard news lede because the story covers most of the five w’s and gets right to the point. It starts with the subject, Britney Spears, and explains what happened and when in a very concise way. Because the story is from an area outside of New York, the where is stated beforehand. The why question is not stated in the lede, but with the amount of publicity Britney Spears has received recently, a why is not really necessary.